Alcatraz
Alcatraz.
Your ultimate doom.
I’ve been here for years. I was convicted for a crime of being a narcissist and murdering my wife, my children, some my friends, the judge in my trial, and precisely five hundred and eighty two more people.
I mean, why should I be put in jail? I can’t help that I’m a narcissist! I was just born being into myself.
I especially hate my dingy, cold, damp, dark cell. It’s the smallest of them all! I absolutely LOATHE this prison! I hate the ignorant, fat headed guards, and the way they think they're so important.
“I HATE THIS LIFE! Kill me already!
Hi Lukas,
ReplyDeletegreat work, How many words did you use in the end?
Your single word opening sentence is a powerful way of beginning. "Alcatraz.
ReplyDeleteYour ultimate doom." Using a narcissist as a character unsure about why he's in jail is an interesting concept.
Thanks Mr.
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